Friday, February 27, 2009

Bronx Masquerade Characters Center Two

The book "Bronx Masquerade" is about a group of kids writing about their daily life how everything goes around school and about their feelings and comments about other students in their school.I do not like this book because it has bad comments about other students and it don't have more action in the chapter. Tyrone is my favorite character in the book. What i really like about Tyrone is that he has a comment after everyone is finish talking in a chapter.

What i like about this character is that he has nice comments or nasty comments about someone.Tyrone has a problem and it's that he always talking about someone and then one of these days he's going to get punch in his mouth.What i have in common with Tyrone is that we both have something to say about someone in the inside.Also me and Raul have something in common that we both love painting and that we would love to paint our feelings.Gloria is my least favorite because she has a kid in the age of 15 or 16 and she don't like school so how will her son follow the same as Gloria.

No i have not experienced those kind of problems because i don't like having a kid on my early age and also i want to have a future in school not like them that they don't like school and they do what ever they like.I would refer Gloria and Shankara to Mrs. Owens for counseling because they both female and don't really have a future of school and they both want child they days and the ages of 15 and 16 and they gonna go threw a lot.

Friday, February 13, 2009

2 pOEmS


Mangu All Day
Mangu All Day All Night
With Cheese Like Salami



Home Run
Yell At The Ball
The Ball Is Again Gone
The Pitcher Is Really Mad Know
Like Bye

Thursday, February 12, 2009

My bull is white silver fish in the river,

White shimmering crane bird on the riverbank,

White fresh milk!

His roar thunder to the Turkish cannon on the steep shore.

My bull is dark like rain cloud in a storm.

He is summer and winter.

Half of him is dark storm cloud

Half of him is light sunshine.

His back shines like morning star.

His brow is red like back of a hornbill.

His forehead is a flag, calling the people from a distance.

He resembles the rainbow.

I will water him at the river,

With my spear I shall drive my enemies.

Let them water their herds at the well;

The river belongs to me and my bull.

Drink, my bull, form the river; I am here to guard you with my spear.

Wednesday, February 11, 2009

Simile & Metaphor

Steven Gerson Ms.Bentley
7o2 2/11/2009


My race is awful.My race is like a ocean without waves.

My race is like winning a baseball game 2-0

Mr race is like fighting against my own people.

My race is being part of the Gerson

My race only my race no one cant take it away from me.


My poem is about me being proud about my race.It talks about
how i feel about my race.


What i learn today 2/11/2009 was about simile , metaphor &
Figurative Language. Simile is when you write a poem with as
and like. Metaphor is when you don't use as or like.